All that glitters
is not gold.
Not all those raptures
are love
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I see the all mighty Ray of light has given lots of praise for you to this one... lol! ! ! you know what i mean! ! ! .... hey i mean it s true...you write most beautiful poems indeed...this is beautiful write...10+++ with lots of love shan
From the cinerary, a fire so bright May be exiguous so effulgent that when renewed shall be a quixotic sword of love that was once broken But now will slay the ghost Of haunted memories keep that sword always in ur scabbard.................amen...nice poem
what has one to say after the masters have spoken... a veritable whos who of the PH world.. just...bravo someone said poet godess! ! ! i too submit a humble yes exquisite lines cheers
the logic expresed in this poem is enough impressive and raises questions in mind... well done anju...+++10
My humble mind was not able to grasp the whole of it... Still I can know what you really want to say... This life is an illusion and sometimes love can be an illusion too... It shines in the beginning and pierce the heart and soul, but gradually as it loses its charm then it feels like that the earlier euphoria was illusionary... But surtely it isn't like that... Life, we spent is always in moments and sometimes one moment of true love can overpower thousands of moments of loneliness, isolation and dejection... A briliant effort... Keep writing...
Enjoyable and linked to the previous one in theme.. A good write.
Not very touching as it should be....the subject is very deep one, but lines are not that much penetrating.
My poet goddess..i get in trance while reading u! Its no less than a miraculous experience words no more remain just words m all soaked in
deep words on deep values..a lovely flow with excellent emotion..great
I like this poem from those of yours i read today The Best, touchy and smart 10
holi aayee re holi aayee re... rang ki bahar hai... aap ka intzar hai.... thandayee mein pyar hai pawan ki bahaaar hai... cool cool sweet breezeee... (the day when u posted this 10/3... was holi) lovely yaar
All that glitters is not gold......true so true, or may be they are or we want them to be to encourage ourself or to keep heart still beating....its a very beautiful and strong write....a false encouragement for the lost hope to keep on smiling...i might be wrong but it is so beautiful...thanks many, many, many 10'ssss... [read my new one 'My Heart Still Morns' if possible] thanks rgds asif
This is beautiful. you took your best qualities out and shared with us. I love the depth and the theme of your poem, for sure love can be extravagant.
OH, WHAT A POEM. I EXPRESS MY FELLING THROUGH THIS; IT IS EASY TO SAY THE WORD LOVE IT'S DIFFICULT TO BECOME A LOVER A TRUE LOVER IS NONE BUT AN ANGEL.