That Girl... Comments

man that WAS beautiful and brilliant! true genius! it's poems like THIS that r TRUE poems! ones with passion and emotion and tell a story that's truthful! that's wat rele happens in reality! i LOVED it!

mind opening... it was butifull i love how it was so diffrent i love how is was SO diffrent! ! and i also love that you did not consertrat on big words and you did not realy try to make a a poem but you simply tolde a story and a story of life poems have rithem and so dos life life makes its owne poem but its the people that have to see it and right it down