That Gaze, Once Turned Comments
That gaze, once turned
Smiles upon me forever.
Those eyes, once burned
As the stars never go out.
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Very passionate and amazing write. A work of an intricate mind.
Superb eloquence and remarkable rhythm, profound thoughts expressed and vivid images painted. Bravo!
I adored this brevity piece not only because the last verse mentioned one of my favorite words *grins* but because artistry was inked in every line.
Oh many thanks again fellow poet. Wonderfully uplifting comments. For one who feels so small in this world!
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7/18/2025 11:41:23 PM # 1.0.0
A wonderful poem! Loved reading this splendid little poem....top score!