That Fresh Breath! Comments

yet the German way of Medication made me suffer and still am in..and had to Write these lines and in pain..and still

You are a brilliant writer!

All I want is thhat Freshest BREATH.. and even now!

i want to contact the source of the inspiration, what is it?

Siddartha, such an interesting write👍👍👍

Your message in this poem is communicated well 'fresh breath'. May you always have it but try and avoid the last one. I like your writing, but if possible use the tools we have at our disposal nowadays, spellcheckers grammar checking, rhyme checker etc., enjoy your poems, keep writing. Hope you don't mind the constructive remarks.Best wishes Damian

we are the center of a circle and the circumference of it is drawn by the three(past, present and future) . without one of the three, life has no meaning. brilliant writing Siddartha.

Striving for hope.

nice but full of pain... a pure breath, I think has no thoughts, and it has no link with past not with future. nice poem friend

my past is erased, my present is clipped... my future is camouflaged! +IS is not needed here or even further on.///even if it is as hottest but as fresh =The wording here would change to... Make it too shorter...It will be a great poem.

Sometimes life does overwhelm us, our minds not wanting to dwell on the past or present, the future is always a mystery! A negative atmosphere seems to surround us, making us doubt ourselves, we become fearful of the unknown, nothing seems normal and there's no reason to find blame for our situation. When it seems there's no way out, feeling helpless, we only pray for that one tiny moment of reprieve to refresh our outlook, attitude and life. Excellent poem Siddartha. One suggestion perhaps, spell check before posting. Before I post anything, I read it out loud, listening for mistakes with the sound of the rhythm, it helps me to focus and correct what I find immediately. Don't worry if you don't always catch mistakes, it's our human nature. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

Past, present and future! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Vivid emotions in quest for fresh air, nice poetry my friend.

Very direct and powerful words in wanting that Fresh Breath. Very Good!

The life a great experience to be experienced and reviewed frequently for a good voyage or journey to the oblivion. Wonderful poem.

Siddartha I enjoyed reading this one keep it up