Thursday, December 3, 2009

That First Kiss. Comments

Rating: 5.0

It almost passed and missed its mark.

It happened in the park one day after
We had walked. We stopped to pick
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Fay Slimm
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Susan Jarvis 07 December 2009

Ahhh, the bliss of that very first kiss - you captured it so beautifully here. But, wow, I didn't know eight and ten year olds had such fun! ! I've missed out big time! S ;)

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Catrina Heart 06 December 2009

wow so lovely to remember..................well done! ! !

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Daniel Kempson 03 December 2009

Great poem but my memory is not that good 10 Daniel

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Fred Babbin 03 December 2009

This reminds me of 'In the Orchard' (Mary Stuart)

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Patti Masterman 03 December 2009

awww so sweet. I was that old x 2 and more; had to wait a long time for first kiss. (smile)

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Carol Gall 03 December 2009

oh fay lovely thatt first kiss memory so wonderful 10

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Fay Slimm

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