Thursday, December 2, 2010

That Face Comments

Rating: 3.9

I love your smile, its just so nice
Your face is so pretty, I always look thrice
Your eyes, baby i love that hazel in your eyes
And your face makes me go crazy as mice
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Raja Ali
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Akhtar Jawad 14 August 2019

A nice romantic poem, nicely penned the emotions in love.

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Agatha Eliza 21 October 2015

A beautiful declaration of love put in verses.10 +++

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 21 October 2014

This is a beautiful poem.

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Kay Staley 21 October 2014

Even though the rhyme scheme is ridiculously simple, it can still be appreciated for its slight allusion to a poem.

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Patricia Grantham 21 October 2014

This is a really beautiful poem. You have to appreciate the many faces of beauty. Very romantic with many praises. Good.

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Rigzin Namgyal 21 October 2013

amazing poetry..what a way to describe a face..and only a poet in love can have that magic..

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Liliana ~el 21 October 2013

Nice; somewhat flawed True emotion spilled like gorgeous paint in glistening reflection Thanks! Love the similes

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Khairul Ahsan 21 October 2013

It's a beautiful poem. One writes this kind of poem when one is 'In Love'. If you have time, please go through some of mine too and offer a few words as feedback. A point to note: Each of the ten readers' comments below has been disliked by 2 persons. None has liked any. Is it an act of sabotage?

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Marvin Brato 21 October 2013

lovely poem, romantic!

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Wahab Abdul 21 October 2012

great poem on love! keep it up!

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Leslie Philibert 21 October 2012

Solid write with good rhymes!

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 05 March 2012

wonderful love poem with a lot of bright emotions. well, good work, keep it up

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Anne Catherine Mccord 09 September 2011

I cant belive that you didnt wote this about me sweety <3.......Denise is a very lucky girl....

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Dane Fagerson 09 September 2011

SPEECHLESS! ! ! ! ! .....Damn it took me away dude :)

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Alex Melinov 09 September 2011

very expressive.......looks like you love her alot <3

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Romeo Della Valle 17 April 2011

A very well penned and poignant write that shows the heart and talent you got! Keep it up! Thanks for sharing,10+++ Love and Peace for always! ...

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Chelsea Mcgriffin 03 December 2010

I LOVE DIS POEM......

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Chelsea Mcgriffin 03 December 2010

im a big fan...i mean ur 16 n u could write this good...im waiting for your second poem........<3

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