I love your smile, its just so nice
Your face is so pretty, I always look thrice
Your eyes, baby i love that hazel in your eyes
And your face makes me go crazy as mice
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Even though the rhyme scheme is ridiculously simple, it can still be appreciated for its slight allusion to a poem.
This is a really beautiful poem. You have to appreciate the many faces of beauty. Very romantic with many praises. Good.
amazing poetry..what a way to describe a face..and only a poet in love can have that magic..
Nice; somewhat flawed True emotion spilled like gorgeous paint in glistening reflection Thanks! Love the similes
It's a beautiful poem. One writes this kind of poem when one is 'In Love'. If you have time, please go through some of mine too and offer a few words as feedback. A point to note: Each of the ten readers' comments below has been disliked by 2 persons. None has liked any. Is it an act of sabotage?
wonderful love poem with a lot of bright emotions. well, good work, keep it up
I cant belive that you didnt wote this about me sweety <3.......Denise is a very lucky girl....
A very well penned and poignant write that shows the heart and talent you got! Keep it up! Thanks for sharing,10+++ Love and Peace for always! ...
im a big fan...i mean ur 16 n u could write this good...im waiting for your second poem........<3
A nice romantic poem, nicely penned the emotions in love.