Wednesday, December 16, 2009

That Empty Space On Your Right Comments

Rating: 5.0

Look to the right
What do you see
Is it empty
Or is it filled
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Allison Unknown
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Danny H 17 December 2009

This is pretty good, but i think you have more poetential to make it better: ] idk just some advice i love ur poetry

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Arturo Vargas 16 December 2009

hey Allison, well I thought the poem was good and I felt I could really relate to it. We pass through many situations where we need something like that and I think you knew how to express that very well.

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Jonothan Queen 16 December 2009

it is a good poem, could u read mine? just look up my name jonothan queen... and feel free to read all them, cause this poem answers my calls i make in mine....

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if you're gunna be his empty space to the rite wldn't it not be empty anymore? ? lolz. i really liked this poem Allison! ! i hope i spelled ur name rite... lolz. it was well expressed and i know how u feel in this kinda situation n i hope u get to be tht empty space (even if it doesn't seem so empty) to the rite for him.

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