That Dusky Eve Comments

Tears came readily to my eyes reading your beautiful poem. The poem fills a lifetime of memories. A wonderful poem dear Valsa. Thank you for commenting on my poem.

Life is a journey and we all collect some memories to cherish while relaxing and this poem is nicely done to recall those gone by moments. I enjoyed it.10+++

When rain is gone and sky gets clear, When night turns deeper and silence creeps, I transverse back to that dusky eve, To retrieve those moments, I sadly cherish! - - - - - A poignantly beautiful write..Wow- -how we cherish those lovely moments when love speaks and nature affirms ! ! ! !

The vow, the life, the parting and the memories are beautifully poetised in fascinating words

The memories of the past in a dusty evening has been astutely and hauntingly inscribe here. It was a moment that rain had gone and dusk had fallen, birds had roosted and their chirping stilled, sky had cleared and the lone clouds trailed when she held him close and whispered in his ear. The last stanza is much impressive. A beautiful poem shard amazingly.10

A well-rhymed, meticulously written song of a poem of infectious nostalgia. Great work. And welcome back. We missed you for a while. (10)

Wow- - - Your pen has such magical powers- -The dusk, the night and sadness came out with such beauty in this poem.Thanks for sharing.Goes to my favorite list.

Oh! I thought it said “That Dusky Eye”. Then I enlarged the text, and I see “Eve”. Are we talking about the “first woman”? ? I heard that white skin really came later. ================================== “bourn”? Definition of bourn 1. : stream, brook Or is it “boum”? ? boum nm bang nf vieilli party Translation French - English Collins Dictionary See also: bouc, boue, boulimie, bout Collaborative Dictionary French-English boum n. bang; party boum nf. party *** 'boum' also found in translations in English-French dictionary 1988, the peak of the 1980s boom exp. 1988, point culminant du boum des années 80 in full swing adj. en plein boum [[PARDON MY FRENCH! ]] - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - “glimmering dames” ……….well, NOW I have some reason to try to get to Heaven! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - “a single lay”? we aren’t talking sex****, are we? ? Here are definitions I found online for “lay” as a noun. As a verb, there were even more definitions! Language! ! Definition of lay 1. 1: covert, lair 2. 2: something (as a layer) that lies or is laid (see 1lay) 3. 3 a: line of action: plan b: line of work: occupation 4. 4 a: terms of sale or employment: price b: share of profit (as on a whaling voyage) paid in lieu of wages 5. 5 a: the amount of advance of any point in a rope strand for one turn b: the nature of a fiber rope as determined by the amount of twist, the angle of the strands, and the angle of the threads in the strands 6. 6: the way in which a thing lies or is laid in relation to something else [the lay of the land] 7. 7: the state of one that lays eggs [hens coming into lay] 8. ****8 a usually vulgar: a partner in sexual intercourse b usually vulgar: sexual intercourse [[did YOU know that? ]] A beautiful poem, as much as it pains me to say so. It is a bit too much like a ‘love poem’ for my particular taste. BUT, it is a GOOD one. Bri :) nicely done; not sure if there are any typos : ( so now you have comments from 2013,2014,2015, AND 2016!

i'm only looking for typos. that is my quest, like Don Quixote. bri :)

You bring back memories in a very beautiful way, relive the best times on that special day. Thanks Valsa

A lovely write, I like to remain in past and I like poems that have emotional memories of the past.

Thank you Khairul for the observation and the beautiful comment! Though it is pure imagination, That Dusky Eve is one of my personal favourites too!

'With hopes galore and dreams anew, On we walked to the edge of the world, A pair of dots merging in infinite space.' A fantastic poetic expression! The last stanza that speaks of retrieving sadly cherished memories, leaves an impression in the readers' minds as well.