Sunday, March 7, 2010

That Day You Touched My Arm Comments

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That day you touched my arm, it seemed
That air was thicker than it used
To be; and even if I dreamed
That fettered things at last were loosed-
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Patti Masterman
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You have a very imaginative & fertile mind that needs to exceed beyond the boundaries and constraints of what has already been. Your writing is very fluent with assertive messages that keep the ready occupied with literal stimulation. Glad to have read some of your poetry.

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