Monday, January 24, 2022

That Day I Remember Comments

Rating: 4.9

Never will I, forget that day,
Mum, met me at the school gate in the usual way,
The thick mist filled the air,
It was such a damp, dreary October day,
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Rebecca Navarre 26 January 2022

Oh, What heart breaking news! .. A very heart moving and powerful poem in loving memory of the lives lost! .. May they rest in peace! ..

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 26 January 2022

some days are unforgettable

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Nabakishore Dash 25 January 2022

Great write about a heavy accident and your mom's love. Heart touching piece My regards to your writing.

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Unnikrishnan E S 25 January 2022

Touching, Really touching. " In our hearts they will stay, The lost souls of Aberfan. " my eyes well up, my vision blurs, I can read no more…

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Jayne Davies 24 January 2022

Thank you all, for you lovely comments x

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 24 January 2022

A brilliant account of those who lost their lives Bravo! for the poem

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David Wood 24 January 2022

Oh I dislike PH, they put the send button two millimetres from where yr typing, I add to my previous comment, theyand their teachers will never be forgotten.

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Jayne Davies 24 January 2022

It was so heartbreaking David x

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David Wood 24 January 2022

Nothing worse than when a child dies except a whole school full, and their teachers, but they ate

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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