Wednesday, May 30, 2012

That Day Comments

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Will that day ever come? That one free day.
First sight of the morning with no sore eyes, headaches and neck pains.
Will that gentle breeze of happiness come?
A joyful day it would be.
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Kgosigkadi Asher Mavuso
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Zanele 21 February 2018

Thank you. I really appreciate the feedback, keeps me motivated.

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Jazib Kamalvi 21 February 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Zanele. You may like to read my poem, Love And. Thank you.

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