Stepping out of time, it seemed,
The scene I saw was one I dreamed,
Or else some sacred, hidden key
Released a treasured memory.
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i'm usually not one for love poems.. but this one drew me in because it seemed to have an honest way about it that many poems on love lack.. once again your poems have put me into thought and have drawn me in =)
This feels timeless and the way you used rhyming just adds to the haunting effect. This is a masterpiece in every way.
That day has sailed away don't recall the past in dismay Yesterday's memory will stay and here's a cheers for today
Lovely piece of work. Regards. Sa