Sunday, September 21, 2008

That Day Comments

Rating: 3.5

Stepping out of time, it seemed,
The scene I saw was one I dreamed,
Or else some sacred, hidden key
Released a treasured memory.
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Nomad Omnia
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Sally Plumb Plumb 18 September 2018

Lovely piece of work. Regards. Sa

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sky dreams 06 December 2009

i'm usually not one for love poems.. but this one drew me in because it seemed to have an honest way about it that many poems on love lack.. once again your poems have put me into thought and have drawn me in =)

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Patti Masterman 13 August 2009

This feels timeless and the way you used rhyming just adds to the haunting effect. This is a masterpiece in every way.

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Arwen Lee CW 29 September 2008

That day has sailed away don't recall the past in dismay Yesterday's memory will stay and here's a cheers for today

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