Monday, November 25, 2019

That Breeze Of Youth (Sonnet) Comments

Rating: 5.0

A gentle breeze is passing through our hair:
Nostalgic notes of tender melodies!
As when our hearts were young, and filled with flare:
With such joy, we were floating like the breeze…
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Captain Cur 26 February 2020

A sonnet was a good choice to write this smooth and nostalgic poem. Soft nuanced words imparting emotion and reflective memory. A beautiful sonnet by all measures.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 November 2019

Simply splendid sonnet, dear Ma’am Mihaela....10++

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 November 2019

the breeze of youth and its virginity touches the heart of every truth!

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 November 2019

Yes indeed, the sonnet reads well, it has some novel poetic expressions

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 November 2019

Moreover, i feel the gentle breeze of this poem...fassnating expression! To MyPoemList

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 November 2019

I love reading sonnets.... the art of composing sonnet is a difficult task! You are doing it so nicely...a commedacomm job....liked and appreciated.......10/10

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