A gentle breeze is passing through our hair:
Nostalgic notes of tender melodies!
As when our hearts were young, and filled with flare:
With such joy, we were floating like the breeze…
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the breeze of youth and its virginity touches the heart of every truth!
Yes indeed, the sonnet reads well, it has some novel poetic expressions
Moreover, i feel the gentle breeze of this poem...fassnating expression! To MyPoemList
I love reading sonnets.... the art of composing sonnet is a difficult task! You are doing it so nicely...a commedacomm job....liked and appreciated.......10/10
A sonnet was a good choice to write this smooth and nostalgic poem. Soft nuanced words imparting emotion and reflective memory. A beautiful sonnet by all measures.