Thankyouverymuch Comments

some of your stuff is boring to me, most of it's good, this is beyond great, this is the best of yours I've read or anyone's on this sight. I love the sound of that bugle.

I think it's a great poem too. Beautiful, heartfelt, flowing lines, create a whole world. I get a little confused about the 2 bugler references. It's not quite clear to me if the bugler in the last line is calling you to this NEW adventure, or more of the old one. I *think* it's the new one, but I'm not sure that's clear enough in the poem.

Wow, looks like somebody really had an impact on you. This is a very nice thank you poem. Sincerely, Mary