Friday, November 28, 2014

Thanksgiving Comments

Rating: 4.6

Thanks to the beauty that attracted my heart,
Thanks to the light that bisected my heart,
Now two hearts in the bosom so weak,
See deep in the earth with my eyes on the peak,
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Valsa George 30 November 2014

It is hard to thank God and also those who have helped us to be what we are! Thanks giving is an almost impossible task.... yet we shall try our best not to be ungrateful! A very timely write in connection with the thanksgiving day! Enjoyed!

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Neela Nath Das 29 November 2014

Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 29 November 2014

This is very outstanding write when a fair play turning unfair with the mischief of an innocent heart makes the piece very illuminating when we perceive innocence as the attribute of God within the child.....a great piece....10/10

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Salini Nair 29 November 2014

Thanks to the beauty that attracted my heart, Thanks to the light that bisected my heart, ................................beautiful poem.....very nicely penned...

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Khalida Bano Ali 28 November 2014

What a poem..............10

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