Wednesday, April 18, 2012

Thanksgiving Comments

Rating: 4.4

O My friend
I just had my supper
Wondering why I'm telling you
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Freespirit Juneja
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Sherif Monem 08 July 2012

easy reading and nice.

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Dead Leaf 09 June 2012

Nice poem.... -sanu

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Rajendran Muthiah 07 June 2012

Beautifully written free verse poem.

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Samra Haq 02 June 2012

Very nice poem beautiful poem. I like the title of your poem by the name of Thanks giving. Especially I like the ending of your poem the you have ended it. Superb

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Vangile Mtyali 02 June 2012

pla write I had supper not a supper n also say, it was cooked by you

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Unwritten Soul 01 June 2012

Still have this memory, but back here to remember thou thanksgiving! enjoy the day_Unwritten Soul

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David Gerardino 05 May 2012

I like the idea! but, the story seems to be all over the place.

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Brianna Winebarger 24 April 2012

love it...to me it seems intense love

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Rekha Mandagere 23 April 2012

Love is sweeter, sweet sentiments are smiling here. We must thank Almighty go for giving us great things in our lives. Nice poem :)

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Aditi Khandelwal 22 April 2012

Sitting so far I have nothing to offer u Thanksgiving is all which I can give u Really nice poem... Aditi

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Khushi Throne 21 April 2012

i am say to....Thanksgiving'' bcaz i invited to read own poem.it is very nice words......

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Claudia Krizay 21 April 2012

I enjoyed reading this- great job

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Donna Caldwell 20 April 2012

Really good poem! enjoyed this!

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Dave Walker 20 April 2012

A great poem, really like it, a great write.

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even sitting so far, i have something to say! these lines are amazing, great thought, imagination: - The Supper u sent me...... Of your world and words... Flying on the love birds this one is quite complex, needs some work for the reader to understand it thoroughly.but once i understood it, it was beautiful good poem. but what i can't help noticing is the use of........., is there anything special about it?

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Wabi Sabi 20 April 2012

wow! that is a sweet poem. I am sure that you are loving! One day I want someone like you have written!

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Neetha Sasidharan 20 April 2012

even snow starts freezzzing wow...i liked dat very much....gud job

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Neela Nath Das 19 April 2012

Huh! Enjoyed. Write more.Waiting for your next.

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Jose Guevara 19 April 2012

There, well expressed even through the constriction of rhyming

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Anhelica Velasquez 19 April 2012

verry good right. i actually really like it. its a nice way to put it all.

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