..Thanks To You.. Comments
Your pensive pen that is filled with honeyed thoughts,
Inks in my bossom with nectarous qoute;
Your marmalade of love flavors my heart;
Your luscious words blossom in my ardour's pot.
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Wow! whoever this poem was dedicated to, must have been so elated, with your gratitude...in beautiful, profound words. great poem
great words..so expressive and genuine..marvelous poem
A stunning show of your poetic soul, lovely flow shows your talent my friend. Keep expressing
A very nice poem indeed...Beautiful expressions :) Keep up the creativity. Pranav
A very nice expressive write to show your gratitute to somebody and used all the ' flowering words ' to entice as such. It's very good but sometimes you had to curtail some of it, as if its too much make up of a face and as if your hiding something. The sincerity of it is gone. Anyways you did a great job of this poem. And Karin and Barry are right..use some of them in your next masterpiece...
A tender rendition of Passion and gratitude - a good combination as we form and become the pople we are... good write Juneil
Yes the passion of the poem and the range of personifcation is impressive yet always remember that to much honey can make one sick....again..loving the intensity and the character of your love...bravo...
Sounds as if you have fallen head over heels in love with a lady poetess, Juneil, which is wonderful! This is a very expressive poem and I am sure most readers felt your great love and admiration for this young woman radiating from each line of your beautifully expressed poem. One helpful thing I might suggest is that though you have an impressive vocabulary, try to simplify your poems a bit by using simpler and shorter words to express your feelings. Your Lady Fair doesn't care if you are a genius, just someone who loves her! Fancy words tend to distract from the poem's emotion, which is the important thing in romantic poems. Carl.
Dear Juneil, Thanks for sharing a rendition of emotion and love for someone of very young age. Perhaps you are to do some editing to make it more attractive. Less said is always better.Write on with equal zeal.--Rajkumar
This is a fine example of sincere gratitude for help - - but wrapped in such sweet words that it reads warm, tender and it touches the heart...... your expressions are well chosen and beautiful....... a full 10 for this - - from Fay..
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7/23/2025 5:03:58 AM # 1.0.0
all i can say is at a scale 1-10 this poem was a 13! lol its really nice keep up the good work im hopein to read more from u -celina