Monday, December 10, 2018

Thanks To The Dove Of Peace Comments

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How can I love my creator the most ancient one?
Neither have I can envelope Him in my arms
Nor I can hug Him and nor can I kiss His forehead,
So I love my virtual creators and their charms.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Bharati Nayak 15 December 2018

It is difficult to pay back what we receive from our Creator.But we can stiill pay back in small way by loving his creations and taking care of them.A marvelous write, thanks for sharing.(Part-2)

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Bharati Nayak 15 December 2018

It's amazing; it's wonderful I listen to a strange heavenly voice All your loans I have repaid, leaving only your parent's love, Return it to my all creatures with its compound interest, To the man, to the beasts, to the insects, even to the greenery, To the dove that flies hungry and thirsty with a branch of olive Injured many times severely but in love of peace she is still alive. - -amazing poem.(Part-1)

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 December 2018

Come to me sweet hearts with your unending indents ////beautifully composed this poem and Rime of the Ancient Mariner by S.T. Coleridge is my favorite one of poems

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Khalida Bano Ali 11 December 2018

A nice thanksgiving poem....................................

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Kostas Lagos 10 December 2018

Nice poem Akhtar! Read it more than once!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 December 2018

A wonderful poem of thanksgiving. Very encompassing and insightful write. Liked the last stanza that conveys love for all creations. Beautifully and cleverly written.

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