Sunday, November 22, 2015

Thanks To Dust Comments

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Everyone is annoyed of you,
but I am thankful to you!
I know your impudent impulses,
but it's you through that I see
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Akhtar Jawad
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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 November 2015

Having thought for impulses for dust is definitely interesting in this wise metaphoric poem shared. Learning to live in love is very nice art. Interesting...10

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Kelly Kurt 23 November 2015

Another skillfully written work

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Loke Kok Yee 22 November 2015

we have the choking haze here once a year for about four months, so i don't appreciate dust too much. but I do appreciate your love of all things and he lovely poem you wrote on it. thanks-10

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Douglas Scotney 22 November 2015

thanks for 'Thanks To Dust'. Have thanked flies and the garden weevil, but never dust. It grays the distance, keeps it out of your face, makes you know there's far to go.

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