Thanks For The Pain Comments

this poem has an unexplained and sudden theme, i think you need more description, but good attempt

I did not like this poem. It seems very rushed and the rhymes are forced. It seems like there is a story to be told here, but it's not told at all.

I really like this poem. In a way i can relate to it. I think you are a very talented writer. maybe I can learn alot from you.. ;)

The couplets add a lot to the sarcasm of this; good choice. Your first stanza is a lot stronger than your second, but a good attempt. A bit vague; feel free to email me if you wanna talk about it.