Sunday, November 13, 2011

Thanks For Stabbing My Back, At Least My Heart Wasn'T Hurt! Comments

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Thanks for telling me, you are not what you are..! ! And thanks for not telling, that,
you have got two faces...! !
Now, please do tell me one thing,
which was the face that I loved,
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Abhishek Tiwari
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Susan Williams 12 September 2020

Now, please do tell me one thing, which was the face that I loved, and which one I talked with...? ?

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Susan Williams 04 September 2020

Thanks for stabbing me on my back when I hugged you...! ! At least my heart wasn't hurt...! ! - - - - - - - - - - > a title that made me chuckle but it also let's the reader know there is awful pain under those words....10

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Exuberant write though the tale is woeful. Please translate a few of your Hindi poems into English for our sake..

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Leena Sharma 23 August 2012

You are so very spontaneous in your feelings....nice play of words!

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Zoya Khalid 27 April 2012

Thanx for this beautiful poem.

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Varna Soyokaze 08 April 2012

And thanks for thanking this girl who stabbed you! That's again how you got me another wonderful poem......... Really lack the words to express the tears in mu eyes after I read this poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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isabella Francis 30 November 2011

Just awesome.. I simply love it..

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Neetha Sasidharan 20 November 2011

wow! u hv successfully put those feelings in2 words...

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Cosmic Dreamer 15 November 2011

So sad... Misplaced love is merely a shadow in the light of true love...

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Aya Kishiko 14 November 2011

Don't get sad because it's over already but smile and be happy because it happened. ^_^.pfufuf.smile!

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ijlal Haider 13 November 2011

betrayed feeling from deep core of heart........ very nice.... i simply loved the line ' thanks for stabbing my back, at least my heart wasn't hurt ' i started it recently.... visit www. pibi2.blogspot.com......your comments means alot....

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Abhishek Tiwari

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