Thursday, January 29, 2009

Thanks Comments

Rating: 5.0

Nothing can really express the way i feel except for the word thanks.
Thanks for becomeing my friend.
Thanks for my 17th birthday present.
Thanks for being there when i'm down.
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Greenwolfe 1962 02 February 2009

I like this very much. The repetition is excellant and the writing was wonderful. It is something I like to see from a young writer. A sense of purpose and determination. GW62

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Jeremy Bailey

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