Thanks Poem by Sumita Jetley

Thanks

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i was just looking at the way,
you keep a watch on me.

and you know exactly,
that you will sit next to me,
and i will be calm.

usually, exactly i noticed.
you read me like a book.

do what to best you can think of,
without my having noticed it,
i have calmed,
i have cried.

against you,
and your exterior,
and you have just been around.

and you are my present.
you are my present that i keep to myself.

Monday, May 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: present
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Few people know me, you are one of very few.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 17 May 2017

An innovative imagination. Thanks

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Tom Allport 15 May 2017

a nice poem of kindness given? ..............well written

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