Sunday, December 14, 2014

Thankful For The Music Comments

Rating: 5.0

Its A long Road
Yet
I Can See clearly Now
To
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Lyn Paul
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Ken E Hall 01 May 2015

Love the title for music is my life that is to dance to...being a ballroom dancer your poem is music to my ears... To dance a waltz to Chopin's music or Glen millers foxtrots gets me over them mountains...Always look On the Bright Side Of Life sure do thanks for the happy message poem...regards

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Daniel Brick 01 January 2015

This is a sound mosaic. We think in terms of colors with a visual mosaic but this one gives us snatches of songs. I could hear the songs in the background as I read. Most of of them are so familiar, so fixed in the memories of the past few generations they pop up without the need to call them forth. That's what your poem does in addition to its surface message. It makes our memories work fast. I like the theme of gratitude that runs through it. We could prevent the blue mood from getting us down if we count our blessings more often. Did I just come up with an idea for a poem? !

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 26 December 2014

Music is the soul of life and indeed an antidote to depressing mind......an amazing piece conveying great inspiring message to mankind......Lyn.....thanks for inspiring...10

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Hazel Durham 24 December 2014

I love this great write, original with your amazing zest for life jumping from every line! Music feeds our soul!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 December 2014

Always look On the Bright Side Of Life When Losing My Religion I Fall Down But I Get Up Again For- - -Exquisite composing. It is a good message to the readers. Well done. Many thanks.

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Amitava Sur 18 December 2014

A beautiful penning about the music in life. Remaining in grief even it guides us to look towards brighter side..... Thank you Lyn to remind.

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Ramesh Rai 15 December 2014

Music is flowing throughout the nature like blood in our veins and permeating the life.Nicely penned.

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Ramesh Rai 15 December 2014

Music is flowing throughout the nature like blood in our veins and permeating the life.Nicely penned.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 15 December 2014

Natural music makes life so beautiful and serene. Yor poem is superb muse. When we lose religion we fall down alright and get up as a chance to ammend. The motivating lines are also poeticaly great here lynn.

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Neela Nath Das 15 December 2014

No tempest can take away the music if we see the brighter side of life.A profound poem indeed.

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Valsa George 15 December 2014

Stringing together scattered pieces and making a composite whole.......Great work! Quite meaningful too! Enjoyed!

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