Thank You Sun For The Full Moon Comments

The transition from day to night is so colorfully depicted in this lively poem. Thank you sir.

A wonderfully symbolic write. Thanks

Akhtar Sahab, i just read Valsa's poem- the royal birth and immediately, i see another poem on moon inspired by the sun and of course, by our dear Valsa's poem that has inspired you to write an instant poem. To quote: Welcome, welcome, my lovely full moon Invade the earth with your cavalry of stars, Attack the earth with weapons of beauty If for beauty and love earth welcomes wars. A hearty welcome to the beautiful Moon! Enjoyed reading your beautiful poem Sir! 10+

You are amazing....! From an idea, you can grow a beautiful poem! So glad once again my poem A Royal Birth has given you the inspiration to write this. You are the master of instant writes. A 10

Just as a magician mesmerizes his audience with his art, the poet deftly does the same to his readers with his pen by transforming the scenery of the day, with focus on sun, into that of the evening with focus on moon and related adventures. Awesome write. Thank you, Akhtar Jawad Sahab. Sun gave his fire to the ocean for a tide But left behind in the blue skies Welcome, welcome, my lovely full moon Invade the earth with your cavalry of stars,