Your loving hands caressed me
As I was ensconced in the warmth of your being
Like a fledgling I reposed and rested
Nestled in your bosom, under your protective wing.
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Brilliantly written poem Aashisha, thought provoking, intense and emotional. Thanks for sharing.
Beautiful piece of poetry depicting the essence of mothers' caring and love from conception onwards. A lovely tribute to a loving mum, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. ➕9
Suspenseful and poignant, you've successfully shadowboxed me, out-maneuvering all my predictions. Thanks for sharing.
Sad, meaningful, poignant and very touching poem. We have a lot to say to our mothers. Thanks for this poem.
This is incredible... I could not believe what I just read.. what heights of emotions, ecstasy and sorrow combined together, so gracefully.. To even an undignified job, you gave the dignified words... WELL DONE! ! ! I wonder, where did it all come from.. was so heart felt..! ! ! Thank you for sharing :) A lot to learn from you, Aashisha
Thank you so much everyone for your insightful comments!