Wednesday, May 27, 2015

Thank You Mom… Comments

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Your loving hands caressed me
As I was ensconced in the warmth of your being
Like a fledgling I reposed and rested
Nestled in your bosom, under your protective wing.
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Aashisha Chakraborty 01 June 2015

Thank you so much everyone for your insightful comments!

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Ayman Parray 27 May 2015

Brilliantly written poem Aashisha, thought provoking, intense and emotional. Thanks for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 27 May 2015

I can not add to what has already been said. Thanks, Aashisha

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Chinedu Dike 27 May 2015

Beautiful piece of poetry depicting the essence of mothers' caring and love from conception onwards. A lovely tribute to a loving mum, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. ➕9

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Alexander Egbe Onoja 27 May 2015

Suspenseful and poignant, you've successfully shadowboxed me, out-maneuvering all my predictions. Thanks for sharing.

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Soul Watcher 27 May 2015

Sad, meaningful, poignant and very touching poem. We have a lot to say to our mothers. Thanks for this poem.

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Purnima Manhas 27 May 2015

This is incredible... I could not believe what I just read.. what heights of emotions, ecstasy and sorrow combined together, so gracefully.. To even an undignified job, you gave the dignified words... WELL DONE! ! ! I wonder, where did it all come from.. was so heart felt..! ! ! Thank you for sharing :) A lot to learn from you, Aashisha

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