Thank You Mama Comments

Thanks for sharing your thoughts, view and concept. This is well expressed and has a good flow and rhythmn from beginning to end. Hope you don't mind, but found a couple of errors that if corrected can only enhance your work. The first five verses are separated from the las two with a large gap. In the fourth verse, line 2 you have 'for nine months to carry I'. This would read better is you replaced 'I' with 'me' A suggestion only for the 6th verse, line 2, you have...'through childhood, through teenage hood'. suggest 'through childhood and the teens. (It flows better.) Apart from all that, this is good. Many blessings to you