Sunday, May 21, 2006

Thank You, Father Comments

Rating: 4.8

Fathers hold you when you have bad dreams
And they comfort you when all is lost it seems.
Fathers teach you to dribble a basketball and shoot a free throw
And they lead you as you grow.
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Tyler Cobb 07 May 2022

Really well written and very well said!

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 22 November 2017

Beautiful verses on fathers. Indeed they encourage you for everything.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 12 October 2015

Verily, father's love is the second greatest love on earth, fathers are a great source of assistance to their children. Loved reading it...........10

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Akhtar Jawad 24 January 2015

A nice gratitude to fathers..................10

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Key'aira Johnson 04 March 2012

I loved it, just beautiful

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Amber Marie 11 September 2011

OH! this touched my heart deeply! How this is so ture baout dds who actually care! I love simplythe way you put the words. I really do :)

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Jordan Giveans 18 June 2010

i loved this poem. it reminds me of my dad! ! ! i feel like crying

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Katie Holmes 06 March 2010

this poem is beautiful and moving. I love it, and it is so true! ! it tells how a good father is and some of the things a loving father will do. This is exquisite.

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Rosa Banks 29 November 2009

That sounds nice well if your dad did that then he was a good dad i wish my dad were still here to help me like your dad did but what can i do? still good job!

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Rosa Banks 29 November 2009

That sounds nice well if your dad did that then he was a good dad i wish my dad were still here to help me like your dad did but what can i do? still good job!

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Neha Aradhye 20 June 2009

lovely, i must say & also very true... :) keep it work & all the very best... ;)

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foxy babii 13 June 2008

wow thats awesome poem it has touched me

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Mansi Sharma 11 May 2008

wow! ! really a Nice poem: -) awesome use of imagery! ! i could actually picturize the whole poem...great work! ! !

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MCKENZi : ] 18 February 2008

reminds me so much of my daddy. i love him soo much! it must be hard to be a dad, not that i would know, but he does such a great job! great poem by the way : ]

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Amber Ross 26 July 2007

i loved your poem, it was awsome keep writing please...

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JESSiCA .k 28 June 2007

i liked your poem, i wish i would have that opportunity with my dad.

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Analisssa Range 12 December 2006

Oh my God i love this poem! i think im going to use it in my dads Christmas card if thats alright with you

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Aisha Sherazi 22 May 2006

Soooooooooo lovely, you have made me miss my father more than I usually do! Nice poem Mahfooz. Peace, Aisha

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Mahfooz Ali

Mahfooz Ali

Lucknow (U.P.) India
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