Fathers hold you when you have bad dreams
And they comfort you when all is lost it seems.
Fathers teach you to dribble a basketball and shoot a free throw
And they lead you as you grow.
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Beautiful verses on fathers. Indeed they encourage you for everything.
Verily, father's love is the second greatest love on earth, fathers are a great source of assistance to their children. Loved reading it...........10
OH! this touched my heart deeply! How this is so ture baout dds who actually care! I love simplythe way you put the words. I really do :)
i loved this poem. it reminds me of my dad! ! ! i feel like crying
this poem is beautiful and moving. I love it, and it is so true! ! it tells how a good father is and some of the things a loving father will do. This is exquisite.
That sounds nice well if your dad did that then he was a good dad i wish my dad were still here to help me like your dad did but what can i do? still good job!
That sounds nice well if your dad did that then he was a good dad i wish my dad were still here to help me like your dad did but what can i do? still good job!
lovely, i must say & also very true... :) keep it work & all the very best... ;)
wow! ! really a Nice poem: -) awesome use of imagery! ! i could actually picturize the whole poem...great work! ! !
reminds me so much of my daddy. i love him soo much! it must be hard to be a dad, not that i would know, but he does such a great job! great poem by the way : ]
i liked your poem, i wish i would have that opportunity with my dad.
Oh my God i love this poem! i think im going to use it in my dads Christmas card if thats alright with you
Soooooooooo lovely, you have made me miss my father more than I usually do! Nice poem Mahfooz. Peace, Aisha
Really well written and very well said!