Monday, September 1, 2014

Thank You And Goodbye, My Beloved Comments

Rating: 4.0

A letter on a box of soul
Curbed words in my dearly loved
Cannot express my true feeling
Prison emotions of saying I love you
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Captain Herbert Poetry
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Susan Lacovara 29 May 2015

Love does not end with the sad goodbye. For so many, the love remains, even after the beloved leaves. Thank you for the poignant reminder. It comes at a most opportune time. Lovely writing. PEACE

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Sossi Khachadourian 27 October 2014

Sad love unfortunate ending of real love, great write keep it up good luck!

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Matthias Pantaleon 09 October 2014

h! Sure pure and unspoilt love as this. I feel the emotion of the poet pouring out on every line. Well penned

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Matthias Pantaleon 09 October 2014

Oh! Sure pure and unspoilt love as this. I feel the emotion of the poet pouring out on every line. Well penned

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Ging Taping 04 September 2014

Sad ending..but i like it! wished you have courage to tell her I love you

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