Saturday, May 24, 2014

Thank You And Goodbye Comments

Rating: 4.7

One day our journey’s crossed paths
We were the perfect friend for each other
You were like my sunshine over the clouds
We shared the laughs
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Chinedu Dike 02 October 2014

It is never easy to say goodbye after such a wonderful relationship, but then, we most learn to accept things that are beyond the limits of our circumstances. A lovely poem indeed. Kudos. Thanks for Sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Khairul Ahsan 24 May 2014

A beautiful poem with an attractive title. 'But now we've chosen our ways And our journey together ends So now I say thank you and goodbye my friend' - A nice gesture. Words flow naturally through the poem. Well done!

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