Saturday, July 18, 2015

Thank You Comments

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Thankyou for the day and night
Thankyou there's someone to squeeze me tight
Thankyou for the flowers and trees
Thankyou for the rivers and seas
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Melissa Patty
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Daniel Brick 25 July 2015

Never apologize for giving thanks. I think that is one of poetry's most important roles - to show gratitude. First we count our blessings, then we give thanks for them. What better way is there to live our lives than in thanksgiving? At 14 you already sensed this and there is an overflow of good will that spills over the rim of your poem. It makes me pause in the stress of the day and echo these sentiments.

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Melissa Patty 25 July 2015

That's true. It is so important to give thanks for everything you have because there's people less fortunate than you.I've been brought up to appreciate and be grateful for what I'm given.Thankyou for Reading and thankyou for your nice comment ☺

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