Saturday, June 13, 2009

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thank u! thank u!
never gona believe what I say
Alas! it came out of my mind today
I was faked by u.
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zeinab sherif
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Eyan Desir 01 September 2009

Good write.......10sssssssssss

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 August 2009

thought u were my friend Who shares with my every moment of my life But I found that all of this was just a pretend..it is indeed good poem.....itiwas not love ut pretent......i love it....10 read mine thank you...miss i miss u

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 19 August 2009

it is a good poem / .. ....

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betrayal is a sign of an inside grudge which finishes all the time by tragedy! ! ! surely, the criminal hearts are the cause of this disease... betrayal is a sign of weakness! ! ! interesting poem! ! ! nice topic! ! ! keep it up...

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Sara Here 01 July 2009

perfect zeinab as usual..great work keep it up betrayal is painful, it hurts deeply..I don't know why I remembered Blake's Poision tree while reading your poem may be because death is the right end of betrayal...Thank You zeinab for your poem.I truly Love you and love your poem

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Afzal Shauq 19 June 2009

what a romantic poem is this one too..means you write very romantic way..whic great.. liked it very much...10+++++++++

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Carol Gall 19 June 2009

betrayal hurts good poem

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Eyan Desir 18 June 2009

! 0s good write.............

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Merna Ibrahim 14 June 2009

The person must be careful, specially in this era....the most thing that I hate is the'Betrayal'..because it is really painful.....nice poem..keep it up..Merna

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