For the grins and thoughts of love;
Made me fly like a liberated dove,
For the words of solicitous act;
Became a shield of my unarmored back.
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okey, this is beautiful..thankf you is only i can say..very nice..grace
I have re-read this verse Juneil and I like it even more on second reading - there is tenderness and beautiful phrasing - - 'watering my dry heart' very poetically descriptive. Keep writing and more like this please......... from Fay. a 10
Very well done with this one. The suject cosen cannot be bettered. There should br more gratitude in the world. Carry on writing on such endearing lines Juneil. from Fay Slimm.
Strong and simple. You use good desciption and choice words. DC