Thursday, July 10, 2008

Thank You Comments

Rating: 4.3

For the grins and thoughts of love;
Made me fly like a liberated dove,
For the words of solicitous act;
Became a shield of my unarmored back.
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Juneil Sechico
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Deborah Cromer 28 July 2009

Strong and simple. You use good desciption and choice words. DC

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Lady Grace 29 June 2009

okey, this is beautiful..thankf you is only i can say..very nice..grace

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Fay Slimm 19 January 2009

I have re-read this verse Juneil and I like it even more on second reading - there is tenderness and beautiful phrasing - - 'watering my dry heart' very poetically descriptive. Keep writing and more like this please......... from Fay. a 10

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Kite Remedy 11 January 2009

nice rhyme with nice meaning, well done bro..

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Ellie Sutton 04 September 2008

Beautifully written, I really like this.

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Fay Slimm 08 August 2008

Very well done with this one. The suject cosen cannot be bettered. There should br more gratitude in the world. Carry on writing on such endearing lines Juneil. from Fay Slimm.

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Juneil Sechico

Juneil Sechico

Bayabas, Cagayan de Oro City
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