Thank You... Comments

With all heartfelt feelings a word of thanks is expressed at the end.

And now I desperately wish I had not been so selfish And you dont have a clue How much I want to Thank you....at least oneshould not be ungrateful inlife and forget telling thank you..lovley poem of your age...10 read mine kids.....school....smiley....no teacher please..henlaid an eggs

Pranav being a poet is in the heart - you are a poet indeed

true as all have said..there is tremendous depth and maturity in this poem

Good work Pranav.............Thanks for sharing.................Thank You..............

Hm I'd say it's not to bad of a poem. It's very good for 10. I would love to see it mature even more and have it wrote on your own.

I took help from my sister in writting this poem.

Hi Pranav - A very impressive poem for one so young. I am nearly 70 years older than you and I could not do any better! You emphasise in each of the first three stanzas the important things our loved ones do for us and for which we should be thankful: A Hug & a Coffee Mug, Empathy and Comfort, 'Human Angels' who bring Colour and Happiness into our lives. In stanzas four and five you remind us that when we are absent from our loved ones all we have are our memories. Therefore it is very important to say thank you when they are actually with us! A great poem which deserves the same score as your age!

excellent......you a re mature and good.... keep it up kiddo....... ;)

You are a wonderfully smart and honest kid.........very gud poem....

Where does this come from?

wonder if u r a ten yr old!

Too mature for your age. CP

Great! ! so touching! ! This is your best poem so far.