Thanatos Comments

To describe a state of falling asleep or entering into death, you have brought in three mythological figures, Hypnos, Morpheus and Icelus. With their combined effort, you fell into a state of lifelessness! Condensed and crisp with a judicious probing into Greek mythology! Wonderful write!

Silence is regained with the pledge. In silence we have perceived the universal happenings. In dreaming and death life is truly renewed. A brilliant perceptional poem is wisely penned...10

Upon 1st reading, I found the poem to be brilliant. And then, I did a tiny amount of research. Pure genius, M.J.! Each poem is such a great adventure!

the the in Poet's Notes.. and how does Ingrid figure in this? ? oh! not Ingrid. Ingmar! ! Ingrid was a few years older; both born in Sweden. ok, how did Ingmar figure in this? why the pleading/begging? must be some symbolism, or a reader needs to know more than i do! ! ! it's all Greek to me. bri (:

Dear Mark. More than beautiful poem i found this. Life is a myth, for us, our own lives. Awakening isn't more worthy than sleeping. Sleeping is equal restless. If PEACE OF MIND is also a myth! :)

You are in the story, then surely you are in the circle of Greek mythology then, but you bring them back to the reality...after that sleep hahaha. By the way, a part of that and to be honest my knowledge of Greek mythology is weak, very weak somehow i do get these and learn myself more, thanks for that.