Wednesday, October 31, 2012

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Rating: 4.0

Treading water, seas away -
I hear you whispering into waves,
Mouthing a forgotten name
Along the meeting of moving lips.
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Stefanie Fontker
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 20 June 2014

Woah mystical n extraordinary freeverse poem! The last line seemd dark. Pls review my latest poem too.

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Astrid Eckstein 10 July 2013

Stefanie, This poem hits home (rhyme not intended) . Bravo sister~

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Hans Vr 15 November 2012

Wow, the surreal part of it speaks to the imagination

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