Beyond the lawns
Beyond the ramparts
Stands a wonder on marbles
Upon the lap of eternal winds.
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You have certainly captured the romantic magnificence of this 'wonder of the world' in this tenderly penned poem. The structure of the poem is pleasing on the ear and images you paint with your golden pen are alive and universal. Your Thaj Mahal is superb. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Words have a spiritual song feeling. ALSO the history is interesting.
you have created a new but fulfiling feeling in every one who read the poem.....well penned and a good imaginery.......