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On high dunes, the lighthouse stands.
Scarlet stem, white collar,
Its transparent brain obeying automated commands.
It casts a pencil shadow out to sea,
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This is an amazing poem. The imagery is so vibrant, I can almost feel it before my eyes. I myself am very fond of lighthouses; I even wrote a poem - The Lighthouse.
thank you, mihaela. I shall look at your poem now. One of our best is the South Stack in Anglesey, North Wales. I haven't seen the one in the Frisian Islands. I was just stuck by a beautiful photo in my book on the Netherlands. Tom
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7/27/2025 7:03:26 AM # 1.0.0
Beautiful descriptive and metaphorical poem. I've read allot of poems about lighthouses and this one is a favorite. I love the way you think about it like a human body with a scarlet stem, white collar, and then the casting of the pencil shadow out to sea. To me, this is a piece that I would love to see you expand. There are so many directions you could take. So well done.
I might take up my suggestion. It was a trigger for the poem about Grace Darling but perhaps there are other avenues to explore within the image. I suppose I was desperate to get both ideas down this morning with Amazing Grace running through my mind. I listened to the Hymn and took down the verses so I could match the rhythm as far as possible. A busy morning! Tom