Such tenuous hold have dreams
On reality, blowing
Aimlessly, galloping free.
They take unkindly to ties,
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Fay, it's magnificient, you chose the best words to create wonderful images..thanks best regards, joan
I think for a time, I'd like to plan my dreams before my sleep I'd think out scenes I'd win every fight if i were a knight climb mountains' and sour like a kite lovely poem Fay! food for thought
the rhythm in this piece is amazing.. only fay.
As this poem matured I could anticipate and now welcome the fine wine it has become. Lovely (as Fay would say) . Hxx
Reigning in on tether dreams... Fay... I see a gallop turn into a cantaloupe... thanks for the ride... aroha, Deana xx
beautiful and meaningful writing..well expressed..
Simply glorious writing Fay. It has such a beautiful flow to it, one I am sure all poets would love. Thank you. 10 Karin Anderson