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Dear Adele le Keur, you wrote a well crafted poem. The phrase 'a beginning in our end' spreads the seed of hope. I give it a 9+. You are a talent. Enrich it. Give us more. You can go higher and higher. Joseph Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Int.Lib.Poetry awarded

I love the waythis flows,10/10

Offers hope to the hopeless. Ah beautiful thoughts, beautifully put.

Wonderful poem, so self contained, every comment I think to make on your subject seems to already be a part of the poem. Embrace your freedom :)