All the way down as the smoke pours out blue
This cold hard steel replaces my feelings of you.
Floating sideways all twisted and bent
I’m in control of this ride and ready to vent.
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A delightful read, the imagery grand. The comparrison to the ride, brillant! Well done Patricia Gale
Nice to you see you can have some fun and enjoy this poetry thing. Really, who's the better driver?