Friday, January 22, 2016

Terrorism.. Comments

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Evil term is the term of terrorism
Darkest word is the word of terrorism
Spreading fear all over the world is the work of terrorism
Bombing, hijacking are business of terrorism
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abhilasha bhatt
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Rajnish Manga 05 January 2017

Extremely impressive and a thought provoking presentation of the picture of terrorism which is a bane of humanity in almost all parts of the world. The subject has been treated with a lot of objectivity going by the destruction it causes and the grounds for its escalation. The man's commitment to the love of humanity and to the peaceful co-existence remains the only ray of hope. Thanks for sharing the poem, Abhilasha ji. There is no religion which support terrorism The religion of terrorist is terrorism We all firstly belongs to the religion of humanity

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Souren Mondal 01 March 2016

To be honest, the poem is grammatically shaky, and has a poor diction.. But what you lack in technique, you more than make up in your zeal for writing passionately about something really, really evil, that is ruining our world.. Thanks for sharing Abhilasha.

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Akhtar Jawad 14 February 2016

A massive criminal act is terrorism Some nation oppose terrorism Some nation condone terrorism There is no religion of terrorism A great poem.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 13 February 2016

Human have been terrorists all the while, when their needs and cries are not heard...The cruelty behind these terrorist acts has to be stopped through proper education..nice poem. thank you for sharing..

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 February 2016

The know nothing than to destroy! Nice piece of work.

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Raj Vikram 08 February 2016

Terrific poem.......very well written...poignant

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Savita Tyagi 30 January 2016

Very nicely written. We all have to raise our voice against it. Thank you for sharing. Hope you can join in Fabrizio's new editorial project.

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Mithilesh Yadav 27 January 2016

Grrt penned...........

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Fabrizio Frosini 27 January 2016

Hi Abhilasha, if interested, you might join our new editorial project: ''POETRY AGAINST INEQUALITY ''.. LET ME KNOW *** POEMS SUBMISSION: - DEADLINE: February 20,2016 - 1 POEM (in English) of maximum 25 lines; - SUBJECT: 'INEQUALITY' as it is described in the OXFAM Report 2016 (released on Jan.18) *** (see below)

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Fabrizio Frosini 27 January 2016

... - abut Oxfam report [ Inequality ]: As Oxfam says, the 'explosion' in the wealth of the super-rich has come at the expense of the majority and particularly the poorest people. A key trend is the falling share of national income going to workers in almost all developed and most developing countries. And the majority of low paid workers around the world are women. Tax havens, used by the rich and multinational companies, are fuelling economic inequality and preventing hundreds of millions of people lifting themselves out of poverty. In such a context, hundreds of millions of people go hungry while resources that could be used to help them are sucked up by those at the top of the wealth-piramid. To reverse all above: - workers have to be paid a living wage; - the gap with executive rewards to be narrowed; - end to the gender pay gap; - compensation for unpaid care; - promotion of equal land and inheritance rights for women (in many parts of the world women have no rights!) : - governments have to take action on lobbying; - reducing the price of medicines; - taxing wealth rather than consumption; - using progressive public spending to tackle inequality. ..

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Pranab K Chakraborty 25 January 2016

We all firstly belongs to the religion of humanity from the community of humanism This will be the real love for our loved ones whom we lost; ............................ Good write. Thanks.

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Swapna Fernandez 24 January 2016

Nicely written.... It's time to join our hands to fight against terrorism...

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Seema Jayaraman 24 January 2016

Delink Terrorism from Religion.. perfectly messaged and well written, Abhilasha

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M Asim Nehal 22 January 2016

Terrorism is the evil face of today's society targeted towards humanity, we should unity and fight against it.....A thought provoking poem, indeed.10++

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Rishi Thakkar 22 January 2016

Only humanism can fight any problem together.. Like the way uve composed it... Superb :)

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Muhammad Imtiyaz 22 January 2016

A wonderful attempt to define terrorism.....and a very needful suggestion towards the end which must be considered positively by all of us....thanks for sharing your feelings mam....

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Nosheen Irfan 22 January 2016

Good work. Beautiful sentiments expressed with a message of peace and humanity. True, humanity comes first.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 January 2016

Anger doesn't solve a Problem; and, war is not the answer to peace. Nice work.

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