Tuesday, April 28, 2009

Terror, Passage To Hell Comments

Rating: 5.0

Madness, never ending jaded,
Played by cunning and knaves, faded,
Who cannot bear world’s happiness,
They see method mad in this ugliness.
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Dr. Yogesh Sharma
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Rose MaryB. 05 May 2009

i liked the way you had the beggining stanzas ryme. Powerful and inspiring.

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brittany 28 April 2009

very good job on this one! good interpretation! !

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Sandra Martyres 28 April 2009

You have eloquently brought out the horrors of terror in this poem...good write

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rago rago 28 April 2009

Expressing in a brief and eloquent way.......yu have made it to think. Who is going to hear.

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 28 April 2009

you've expressed it greatly through this poem! bravo

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