Terror Comments

A beautiful poem

Terror foe of God having no religion.Thanks for sharing.

very nice, i like your use of words.

I will say good like others

Perfect & fantastic, like always my friend.

I feel the terror as if I'm there to witness it... The words and emotions just keep on flowing in nicely... ^-^

extreemly powerfull words, put together in a poem! this is lovely and very enjoyable to read! thanks for sharing

Very Powerful. What I like about this poem, amongst a number of other aspects, is the compression. So much, in so few lines, means the poem enfolds itself into itself. Because there are so many omitted details, the mind provides its own, and that allows time and space to fold itself upon itself. The effect, in my opinion, is to create a sort of implosion rather than the usual outward motion that one would expect.

like the way u express a storm, intristing..keep it up

Thankyou for sharing your poem with me....Nice write

Great wite against terror., , , , ,

A true description of terror. Great write. Thanks for sharing with me

WAIT! let me be more specific of what i was visualising. i was seeing a car bomb..

wow, very good. i am picking up that the subject is terrorism? correct? or am i off base... i do that sometimes ;)

Nice keep doing your thing....

really good well penned......... keep it up........................

wow. so powerful and so real! i loved it thank you for the read, please give my poems a try too, i am sure you will like them.

live audience in unprecedented death opera! that is terror indeed. Great write, my friend. mark

A true description of terror, a very powerful write of what many people fear this was excellent my friend. Thanks for sharing Melissia Ann

A true depiction of terror with an interplay like simli, between the soulful and calming art and the phenomena of the aweful and frightening enviornment. Regards Sameer