Terrible Night Comments

its diffidently full of emotion and real emotion too very good write

this poem is specail, yes. the emotions are tru.. with you tellignme i coudl see it was written form the heart. very good. all the best to you popz and family.

Excellent! , Emotive words and this exciting up tempo from the dark context narrative.Also id like to add, i think your very good for your age=) .x

A perfect narration, keeps the reader glued to it. It displays great poetic skill with perfect rhythm and flow. It never loses its human touch. I hope your father is back to normal. Thanks for sharing. CP

Hi Brandie, It is a great poem if you could make it more concise. Loose the repetition of the same points that you've furnished in different words and add specifics... dramatic theme that keeps you reading to the end... Deva

that was a touching piece..written well without loosig grip..your dad must be very lucky to have a daughter like you

Brandy you have captured all of the drama and suspense and tragedy well, and I believe over time you will edit and re-organize the flow to be even a more provocative accounting of your epidose with this family disaster....