Monday, March 3, 2008

Terrain Of War Comments

Rating: 4.9

Those who served the country
Before are gone and dead
Never again will they return
War has brought death and
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Kayode Ogunleye
war
COMMENTS
Ramesh Rai 24 September 2013

War is the most evil deed of mankind. History will ever remember and the coming generation will certainly abuse for this evil deed.

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Vanessa Svaleson 02 May 2008

i like it and i wish war wasnt neccesary but it is some of the time very good thought you did great shorty

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Troy Clark 21 April 2008

Nice poem, but war is needed for a greater cause.

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Riquetta Elliott 16 April 2008

I wish the war would end and the violent behavior will cease. Great point-of-view and a very nice poem.

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Cristian Dolon 16 April 2008

This poem easily rivals mine of the same title and type... Very good show! Hope you read my version and remember this hint... I've voted on this TEN!

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Bill Webb 12 April 2008

Well said. Wars are about economics, in the end, but they are made of people.

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Monica Engeler 12 April 2008

I too wish wars would end forever. They never end well and so many have to die for it. Why why why is all one can ask. Good meaning and well worded. I like this one.

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Sílvia Oliveira 05 April 2008

Dear Ogunleye Kayode, Mine is the same comment as Stella S Qishi on your poem 'War'. It can express the very tragic essence of what a war is, in my opinion. Of course that we as poets sometimes let the feelings only emerge from our hearts, not adding any 'poetic technique' which is important too. This is what brings to the feeling a 'proper clothing', that is what characterizes this genre. I may be mistaken, but in your case it´s going to happen very soon! I´ll keep reading them and sending some comments, OK? Congrats from Brasil!

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Stella Sisanda Qishi 01 April 2008

i'm glad i'm not the only one opposed to war and i guess that makes us 'poetical anti-war activists' if there's anything like that.

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perfect everglade 28 March 2008

this poe is so true. war is horrid. i can say this from expierence with people dying that were close to me. nice poem :) Sara<3

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Bless Villena 14 March 2008

very poignant and touching captures thoughts perfectly into words

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rohit sapra 14 March 2008

This poem is really amazing as its very touching and also every word describes the pain of destiny. Enjoyed reading it.

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Emancipation Planz 14 March 2008

How sad that you have not only witnessed this but are still living through it, may the expression of poetry continue to hold caring and healing properties for you.

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Sandra Fowler 07 March 2008

War brings tragedy wherever it occurs. A very strong and poignant reminder of this eternal truth. Thank you for sharing. Warm regards, Sandra

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