Those who served the country
Before are gone and dead
Never again will they return
War has brought death and
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i like it and i wish war wasnt neccesary but it is some of the time very good thought you did great shorty
I wish the war would end and the violent behavior will cease. Great point-of-view and a very nice poem.
This poem easily rivals mine of the same title and type... Very good show! Hope you read my version and remember this hint... I've voted on this TEN!
Well said. Wars are about economics, in the end, but they are made of people.
I too wish wars would end forever. They never end well and so many have to die for it. Why why why is all one can ask. Good meaning and well worded. I like this one.
Dear Ogunleye Kayode, Mine is the same comment as Stella S Qishi on your poem 'War'. It can express the very tragic essence of what a war is, in my opinion. Of course that we as poets sometimes let the feelings only emerge from our hearts, not adding any 'poetic technique' which is important too. This is what brings to the feeling a 'proper clothing', that is what characterizes this genre. I may be mistaken, but in your case it´s going to happen very soon! I´ll keep reading them and sending some comments, OK? Congrats from Brasil!
i'm glad i'm not the only one opposed to war and i guess that makes us 'poetical anti-war activists' if there's anything like that.
this poe is so true. war is horrid. i can say this from expierence with people dying that were close to me. nice poem :) Sara<3
very poignant and touching captures thoughts perfectly into words
This poem is really amazing as its very touching and also every word describes the pain of destiny. Enjoyed reading it.
How sad that you have not only witnessed this but are still living through it, may the expression of poetry continue to hold caring and healing properties for you.
War brings tragedy wherever it occurs. A very strong and poignant reminder of this eternal truth. Thank you for sharing. Warm regards, Sandra
War is the most evil deed of mankind. History will ever remember and the coming generation will certainly abuse for this evil deed.