Terrace Of Violence Comments

good thought provoking words.... liked it..

A WONDERFUL POEM................

I shouls see Guernica again and read this back!

no more tricks.....................well penned sir.......

I admire Picasso’s Guernica and you have captured and portrayed much of what he tired to say with pictures. I could tell that you were describing his work (bull and horse) even before I read the bottom note. We need these reminders of war and its atrocities. Unfortunately in answer to your questions, we can only say, “We can and will try.” We need to keep asking these questions. Very will composed.. The word “wrenched” in the first stanza is very effective.

For ''people animals buildings wrenched'', they should be hyphenated to make the rhythm more practical.The story denoted herein is consummate and sublime.

Hi Ahmad, i always love yr words, keep writing and tks for sharing

Dear Ahmad, This poem unsheaths not only the starkness of warfare, but also the wide spectrum of humanity it affects.

A very good poem for a worthy picture.

War's consequences..destruction of humankind... This poem of strong revelation... Thanks for sharing!

War is a painful thing to face, resulting many predicaments.. War itself is a predicament.. Well penned..

Well written..thanks for sharing

Good write! Keep it up!

This poem is very good And it is well spoken

Powerful poem eloquently written Ahmad! United together i know you will win over this evil an terror an see no more violence an warring an peace and prosperity will prevail.. Best regards! *10plus*! Friend Thad

VERY DESCRIPTIVE, I AGRE WITH YOU ON no more wars no more tears no more tricks no more victims

too good ahmad........we hav to keep in mind tht war alone dosn gets a problem solved..............................let love been dropped on people thn bombs...sebastine..

You swaid it well, your words show us how we are all interconnected. We all affect oneanother on a grand scale. Let us remind that. Heavenly greetings from home

Thoughts translated to words....No More War, No More Tears, No More Tricks, No More Violence. We must say No More. Wonderful expression......10

a thought provoking and an imaginative poem.