No depth you say?
No depth at all
Just skimming the surface?
Yes, dull, uninteresting
How deep would you like it to be?
As deep as Mariana Trench,
As deep as the space
And not simple?
No, something puzzling, abstract, obscure
Like our mind?
Like our nervous system,
Like the electric pulses going through it
Complicated, unexplainable, mysterious
Done, you will have it!
A nice poem indeed with a great flow. 'How deep would you like it to be? As deep as Mariana Trench, As deep as the space And not simple? '...is so nice. Enjoyed so much. Thanks for sharing.
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No depth at all... just a skimmer! Yess, you are absolutely right. An excellent poem.