Friday, February 10, 2012

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Why does the light seem brightest,
just before it fades and dies?
Why do the waves rage highest,
at the breaking of the tides?
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Jojoba Mansell
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Valerie Dohren 10 February 2012

Enjoyed reading your poem very much.

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Kevin Patrick 10 February 2012

A lovely write, although despairing its beautifully assembled

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