Terminal Leave. France 1917 Comments
I spent last night in my valley.
Green and peaceful, it is.
Slow wagons of unburdened past
creak slow down berry-bright lanes.
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Very beautifully written. Can really put your reader right there beside you. Nice job. Sincerely, Mary
simply stunning James... it is so peaceful and calm. I loved it! please keep posting.. HBH
Wow - another heart-wrenching poem which attacks all the senses at once. And again, a fabulous last line. Congratulations. More poems please and more information on you - your books etc, etc.
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7/23/2025 8:53:41 PM # 1.0.0
Powerful words capturing so well the feelings of the young soldier in some 'tranchée'. Bravo!